danbricklin.com/speeches/wlforum2000

Help!
This was the "Help!" page where I asked for help. I got it -- thank you! I leave it here for historical reasons.

Here's what I need help with right now:
Comments on what I've written. Is it interesting? Is it helpful for the intended audience (diplomats, foreign policy people)? What about the organization? Are the analogies understandable? What can I leave out?

So far:

Draft #3 (5 pm 5-Sep) -- I have to be able to deliver this in under 12 minutes. This is a modification of "Draft #2a (10 am 5-Sep)" which was a re-write of "Draft #1a (11 pm 3-Sep)".

Additional examples for the Examples Page. I'm especially looking for other examples of connected devices and databases applications. Anything with GPS, remote sensors, etc., would be great.

© Copyright 2000 by Daniel Bricklin
All Rights Reserved.